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for Daddy

by Lithium

schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have talent. Write more, please. I want to see the culmination of raw skill and experience.
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn, there are actually people like that...bastards...poor kid u.u
person SODA
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor lil' boy! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, that was...odd...but you have incredible writing talent.
person GlassOfButtercups
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I saw the summary at first I was going to flame, I mean yes for freedom of speech and all, but there is nothing erotic about the subject. Then I read the review and decided to read this myself when it appears that it\'s more drama/angst then erotica, and it is. It makes me angry and it makes me want to cry. Maybe you want to put this story in another section, like Horror or Dark.
person Guilty *Not logged in*
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it
I was raped by my daddy when I was little and molested by my mothers other boyfriends..Its..pretty ..I dunno good.
It got to me though and hit something inside..

Bravisimo
person ryokoporter (too lazy to sign in)
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok.. i\'ll be brave and review this... i gave it 5 stars too... cause it\'s very interesting. not sexy... but interesting. the pov was morbidly accurate for children who go through this i think... and i must say i was intreaged (i cant spell)
person Bex
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
an interesting beginning.

I like how you've written it from the child's POV, and that he doesn't really understand what's going on but he still thinks it's wrong.