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for Artifical Rose

by snakecharms

person DonPedro71
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far, but very hard to read (physically hurts eyes, I mean). Separate thoughs with paragraphs and be sure to include plenty of blank space.

Reading on line stories requires different fprmatting than reading stories form a book.