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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There was a nice opening and first chapter and second though quite short, it's good and h nic nice plot going on.
Only, do try sticking to one tense, if you write in past, stick to the past tense. If you want to write in the future tense, stick he fhe future tense. Also observe the proper spelling of "you" not "u".
Impress me.
Only, do try sticking to one tense, if you write in past, stick to the past tense. If you want to write in the future tense, stick he fhe future tense. Also observe the proper spelling of "you" not "u".
Impress me.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!!!!!
I AM AT ATHE EDGE OF MY SEAT HERE. UNCERTAINTIES, YOU ROCK. YOU R WRITING IS
JUST SO FULLFILLING TO ME, I JUST DONT KNOW HOW MUCH TO THANKYOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC.
YOU ROCK MAN. I HOPE THAT YOU KEEP ON WRITTING. YOU'RE THE BEST .
P.S.
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU , SO MUCH.
I AM AT ATHE EDGE OF MY SEAT HERE. UNCERTAINTIES, YOU ROCK. YOU R WRITING IS
JUST SO FULLFILLING TO ME, I JUST DONT KNOW HOW MUCH TO THANKYOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC.
YOU ROCK MAN. I HOPE THAT YOU KEEP ON WRITTING. YOU'RE THE BEST .
P.S.
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU , SO MUCH.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it's a great start i hope you'l write more soon.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! this story is realli great! i love the story line! lookin forward to more!
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW. i love this fic. plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... you have to keep on writing. this fic is what i fantasize all the time.
P.S.
I LUV YOU ^-^
P.S.
I LUV YOU ^-^