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You didn\'t get your story from Gryvon\'s \"Beauty\" did you? If you didn\'t then you should read it.
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=3822
Check it out, you would enjoy it I think.

ciao

I\'m in love. :D I know you have your mistakes and all but the story itself is beautiful and you\'re doing a marvellous job with it. I can\'t wait to see more.

ciao

i like this story hope you update soon.

Constructive criticism eh? Well it seems that is all I can give in every review I have ever posted. When someone asks me to do so its seems like I just cant, lol. Anyways I like where this story is going that is if I am right about where it is going, can\'t wait for an update! ^-^

i\'m so excited that u r continuing!!!!!

I think it\'s a great fic you\'re writing. I don\'t think you should worry over their ages or wheter they\'re illegal or not. It\'s a fic, it\'s not real and just for entertainment. Just keep doing a great job of writing these fics. thanks

I imagined Jason to be about seventeen. In some places, seventeen year olds are considered old enough to consent to sex, so you should be okay making him seventeen if you want! As a response to a question you asked earlier, I do like how you change pov\'s during the chapters; it mixes things up!

I think there should be some kind of confrontation between Alec and Gabriel sometime in the near future. It would be awesome. \'Cause you just know Jason\'s dad is gonna be pissed that someone is taking up Jason\'s time; after all, time equals money!!!!! But it\'s just a thought...

I love this story, pretty please update soon. You don\'t want to see me beg, it;s not pretty. If you want my opinion, (you probably dont) I\'d say to make Jason 16-17, because if he was 18, why wold he live with his dad (especially an asshole like that) But that\'s just my two cents. Keep up the good work!!

Yay! I\'m lovin\' this fic! Anywhere from 16-18 is good for Jason. Oh, and when you update could you possibly e-mail me so that I know?

i think you should make Jason 17 years old and have Minor warning...cuz that makes it all the better...then make Gabriel like 25 or 26 ...not too old but older than him by a ... few years...

I like this story, please update soon! i wanna know if something REALLY REALLY angsty happens...like, Jason\'s father takes him as well for free...like trains him to be the perfect prostitute or something