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July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would not bother with this story. It's tagged as complete how ever the sequel hasn't been updated since 2006. Not worth the time with so many....just leaves you hanging.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Your like so cool! Awsome story
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March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is not flame, mind you!!
Bad grammar usually puts me off a story. Your grammar/spelling (fallowing instead of following, for example) is bad- but the plot held me untill I read the whole thing through. And I\'m looking forward to reading the sequel as well! I suggest that you find a beta-reader to check your posts. This will not only draw in more readers, but it will also help to better your own grammar and vocabulary. Off to read the sequel.......
Bad grammar usually puts me off a story. Your grammar/spelling (fallowing instead of following, for example) is bad- but the plot held me untill I read the whole thing through. And I\'m looking forward to reading the sequel as well! I suggest that you find a beta-reader to check your posts. This will not only draw in more readers, but it will also help to better your own grammar and vocabulary. Off to read the sequel.......
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. That's all there is for me to say.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing through. It was amazing. I can\'t wait for the sequel. I hope Alec dies. DIE DIE DIE! :D
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t beleaved it ended this way... It was such a good story... o well
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh. i don\'t think i liked it. your writing skills weren\'t too terrible, but the constant switching of POVs kinda ticked me off. i dunno some readers like that. personally i don\'t. your plot needed a lot of work though. it was one cliche after another. i\'m a whore, my mommy killed herself, my daddy beats me, i cut myself, my daddy raped me, etc. blah. i\'m sure you\'ll get the hang of this soon enough so don\'t worry about it. keep improving your writing skills and your stories will get better.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crys* ur so mean, i want to read more/ please hurry up, i\'ll pay u *looks seductively at u*
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m impressed, that one line about, \"sucking on the neck with expertise\" you seem to speak from experiance? If so, your boyfried must be sooo cool, and amazing. He must be so hot, yet modest at the same time. Lucky you, not everyone can have such an amazing boyfriend. But enough about that. The storys are very very good, and i am most impressed with them, you really have a talent at writting storys, and i hope to read a sequle. Maybe with somehting other then M/M? like f/f of f/f/f, why stop there? how about f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f/f? hmm, i\'m liking the sounds of that. Well think about it. But most importantly think about how amazing your b/f is, and how happy he must be to be dating such a gifted author.