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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. It's erotic and beautiful.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, for a story like that, I've gotta ask for more. It was well written, grammar was good (zomg! It's unheard of!), it was a damned hot story....
I'd like to see a few more, just to see what else that god has up his sleeve... Anyways, great story, and I hope you keep doing great work like this.
I'd like to see a few more, just to see what else that god has up his sleeve... Anyways, great story, and I hope you keep doing great work like this.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written, I like that there was a reason for what happened to Po, that it wasn't just bringing a sacrifice to someones master. This was her god, who she believed in and you did a magnificent job of writing it.
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Apart from the typo\'s it was great. I love your work.
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Tou have some raw talent
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first story on AFF that I have read every (or almost every) word of. Your writing talent is absolutely exquisite. Thank you for breaking the AFF tradition of porn without plot.
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noramlly the stories here are nothing but smut, but yours is something more. Granted, it is smutty, but I think it is the first such piece written by someone who can actually write. I really liked it, even though BSDM isn't really my thing. I hope you write some more.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written. Like it a lot. How 'bout a longer story 'bout Khalla?