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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great saga. Keep up the good work.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow I loved it ya wanna update
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, you've improved over the years. just promise that we'll work on a story together again sometime in the future.lol
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens... =D
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh! I hope she smartens up and makes them jealous of each other so they all kill one another! Those scummy men need to pay. Still, loving this story.
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He should save her. Come on, there's always a good guy in these types of stories. It should stay that way. LunasStar. I think this is a great story by the way. Keep it up.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god. make her his sex slave or all sex slave for all of them. jesus. this is so hot. but damn, keep her tied up.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
free her eventuly... add someer ser stuff maybe some animals.... make it interesting ... great start though!!!
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it u must update
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so turned on from your story. I think he should help her get free and keep her, but now just yet. We need more fun first!