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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hot. verrrry hot. i really like them together, theyre almost more interesting than the gangbangs b/c they have entirelyparaparate agendas.
break her heart.
--dc
break her heart.
--dc
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading your reviews you guys! I'm not ready to put up another chapter, but i just have to respond to some of these ideas...
Um, Johnny's cousin isn't gonna come down there and fuck her, hello? That would make less sense than Johnny falling in love with her, which isn't gonna happen, since he's a fucking RAPIST and all. I don't know what else to say.... this isn't a love story. This is gonna be hard core from beginning to end. If you want a love story, read the NC-17 romance stories. And honestly, haven't you ever heard of Stokholm Syndrome? This is such a clear case of it, if it were real (which fortunately it isn't) it would be a textbook case.
Sorry, i've had a long weekend and i just wanted to respond to you all.
On a lighter note, i just wanted to tell you all that i LOVE your comments. Keep them coming, even if i seem to ignore them. I'm listening!
Um, Johnny's cousin isn't gonna come down there and fuck her, hello? That would make less sense than Johnny falling in love with her, which isn't gonna happen, since he's a fucking RAPIST and all. I don't know what else to say.... this isn't a love story. This is gonna be hard core from beginning to end. If you want a love story, read the NC-17 romance stories. And honestly, haven't you ever heard of Stokholm Syndrome? This is such a clear case of it, if it were real (which fortunately it isn't) it would be a textbook case.
Sorry, i've had a long weekend and i just wanted to respond to you all.
On a lighter note, i just wanted to tell you all that i LOVE your comments. Keep them coming, even if i seem to ignore them. I'm listening!
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more fucking!!!!!!!!!!
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you can't change Johnny into some nice guy. he's not not, it wouldn't fit. Get Johnny's nephew or brother or someone to find out whats going on and rescue her, and they can fall in love and fuck.
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this would be the best story if she was freed from the gang by Jhonny, who fully intended to keep her as a sex slave. slo slowly fell in love with her and grew a bit soft and lovey. I would totally love this story if you did. A sort of fan if you will. Besides, I'm only really fond of the nicer stories anyway. I have nothing against bondage though. That's fine if both love each other.
Thanks.
Thanks.
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! This is ONE HOT STORY! I can't wait to see what Johnny will do next to Elisa..
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
actually, im kinda glad you gave us a breif look into Johnny's head, seeing as he's going to be one of the more important characters. good job in portraying the schism within his psyche.
and bring on the sex.
:-)
and bring on the sex.
:-)
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Each chapter has me sweating more than R Kelly at a girl scouts meeting! Hot stuff.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That poor mixed up girl. They keep this up and her ass will go crazy and kill them all...hmm, that's a thought. ^_!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, if you dont add more to this soon, i will die!!!!!!! This is by far the best one i have read so far, please se pse please keep up the good work and update it immediatly!!!!