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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear you,
I really like your fic. It's written very good, and eventhough almost every chapter contains sex, it's still written differently every chapter. That's amazing!
Well, I'm looking forward to reading chapter XI. ^^
Love,
Moonyfluff
I really like your fic. It's written very good, and eventhough almost every chapter contains sex, it's still written differently every chapter. That's amazing!
Well, I'm looking forward to reading chapter XI. ^^
Love,
Moonyfluff
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where's this girls parents? Is anyone looking for her? That would be nice if their was search party (Big hint) out looking for Elisa and her attackers got scared and slipped up and got caught. one one find this girl and lock these jerks up! ^_^
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
let johnny and elisa run away together!
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
payback is cool and stuff, but dont go too violent please! thanks. by the by, i still vote for elisa and johnny to leave together
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story so far. I cant wait to see what you put her through next
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Men are scum...no that's not exactly fair. Men like THESE guys are scum! I hope Elisa's manages to get away or better yet, cuts their dicks off with a rusty hack saw! That would be justice.
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think that you should go with the origianal idea of Johny pretending to want to help her, and then just flat out breaking her later on when she finds out it was all just a game. I would add some more bondage aswell, but thats just me. Please continue soon though, I am addictied to this story! I really likes your last sentance where you said that she was now addicted to sex. That was a great clift hanger, but don't keep us waiting too long!
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mm. addicted to sex. sounds yummy. just make sure theres plenty of it
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Suggestions? I'm all for revenge, especially any terrible revenge befalling Johnny. He's the worse of all the guys because he's fucking with her head. I sooooo hope (begging on my knees) each man gets a horrible payback, but then I'm a evil bitch. I'm glad this is fictional or I'd want to gather up a lynch mob.
P.S. Addicted to you story!
P.S. Addicted to you story!
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well.. the chapter wasn't bad... I'm actually glad She and Johny finally got it on! Yeah! Hope you update soon!