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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JEEZE DUDE! HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT ONE OUT!!! Lol. I fell in love with this fic from the beginning because it\'s finally a rape that I\'ve found on this site, and a good one at that. I\'m not giving u any ideas cuz I want to be surprised... so... yeah... damn, now I\'m horny. Grr...
~MistressAlleycat
~MistressAlleycat
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, though I will say there are a few errors of your text. I\'m having trouble remainig comfortable when somebody touches my nipples, but I think your story may help me on that; I\'m getting aroused.
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn... terriffic... *eats another apple slice*
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the late review, I had majorly stupid computer problems. Okay, enough about my problems. What can I say that hasn't already been said? Kickass fic! I will say this, though. I think (fictional or not) a woman can only take so much crap before she finally snaps! And Elisa...hmmm. Anyway, amazing and wildly addicting story.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you...I really do.lol
great sex scenes and story as well. We think about the same kind of stuff in the same kind of way writing this stuff...weird huh? lol
I would've ended it with an all out gang bang myself. u gotta have that!
great sex scenes and story as well. We think about the same kind of stuff in the same kind of way writing this stuff...weird huh? lol
I would've ended it with an all out gang bang myself. u gotta have that!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, sooo hot. Go on with it, further and further.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Elisa. Once she catches on and knows she's been tricked, I think (hope) she pays them back. Nothing is scarier than a pissed off woman! Good chappie.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all night. wow. tie her up. lots and lots of... copulating, please.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it u must update it
please e-mail me when u update ur ficcies
please e-mail me when u update ur ficcies
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Out of many stories I've read in one sitting today, this one makes the most sense and is VERY believeable to me. After all that beating, makes it seem that she would love sex now. Hope for more! =D