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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice little fantasy
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great chapter...sorta. it shoulda been longer due to the delay. I really don\'t know what\'s gonna happen next. either the cops will see the video. or they\'ll get off scott free. personally if they get off it would be cool. cuz if the cops came it would ruin your whole story line...but w.e. your story your rules. i think you have amazing talent. just gotta make longer chapters!! But once again awesome story;)
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... -Jacks off.-
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve managed to top yourself yet again.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story,I think that they should go off together but I also think that he should still keep her to himself in his own little cage.Nice and evil.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wilder and wilder, this plot here. Is anyone even looking for this girl?! Maybe someone will see her on the site and have a conscious? Could happen....nah.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....And you stop right here..... shame on you...
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Die Frank! Die all of those men. Good fic though.
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who senses a mental breakdown in the works for Elisa? Maybe I\'m overthinking it, but I think the girls gonna go apeshit wants she finds out she\'s been tricked by Johnny. I hope so! *Begs on hands and knees* By the way, awesome chapter.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just thought of some ideas you may or may not have thought of... make them use toys on her! U know, erotic torture; tease her like mad, making her want it like crazy! U know, torture... perhaps she\'s done something wrong, no? *shrugs* A good idea, none-the-less.... yes?
~MistressAlleycat
~MistressAlleycat