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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know what happens!!! Johnny finds out Elisa is his long lost sister and he runs off with her because of family, marries her, and has deformed children through the incest they\'ve done!!! Mwuahaha!!!! I know, I\'m an evil and disturbed child... and I\'m loving every moment of it! :-D
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when r u gonna update?
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue please...great story!!!!!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh, I dunno, it\'s really soo good so far, but I\'m kinda scared for her...hm...she might even do something stupid. I dunno, a part of me is thinking that she\'s gonna end up dying, or something like that. But I\'m hoping that something will happen!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit... nice. *Masturbates*
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Someone\'s GOT to see this girl on the internet and reports it! I mean, geez. I\'d hate to be Elisa after the ramifactions of her stunt with her name goes down. These bozo\'s are going to get even sicker aren\'t they?
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm..cool, dirty but very well written. I wonder if Johnny will fall in love with Elisa, and without meaning to get her pregnant, but comes to realization that he loves her and try and get her out of there, they run away together to Las Vegas, because Johnny is the owner of a big chain of casinos. You did say guess right? Hurry and continue!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sure the rest are going to do things to her
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Biting my nails* Don\'t kill her! At least don\'t that.
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elisa is literally fucked now! I can\'t even imagine what\'s going to happen next. Maybe someone will see her, hmm? I\'m still hoping Johnny betrays the other guys (and they all go to jail) and runs off with Elisa, and then her ass betrays him! He\'s just as bad as the rest! Waiting eagerly for more. =D