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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh this is a really good story!! I think you should keep writing. I think Johnny and Elisa need to runaway and get together.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please hurry and update...she needs to be rescued!!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on!!! I just reread ALL of this from the very begining and found it even more erotic than I had at the start. Quit wasting time and hurry up with the next following chapters!!! Please!!!
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting, honestly it would be a really ironic ending if Elisa ran off with Johnny only to find out that he was just as bad as the rest. As for guessing maybe her parents are watching or someone from school. *shrugs* Update soon!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More updates??? please???? Ok, it\'s been long enough now!!!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when r u gonna update I suspect the cops are listening or Johnny rescues her
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this going to get updated?
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Johnny\'s going to take Elisa away to his place during the middle when the other guys are sleeping.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep her in bondage. she likes the ... group activities doesnt she? elisa sandwich!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I think somebodies\'s going to clue in on her name. I also think she\'s going to get hurt more now that she did said her full name, but the boy\'s should have thought of it first if they were smart enough to think of everything else. *grins* way to go, Elisa; way to go.