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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I say Johnny should keep her for himself.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good story. I think ge should set her free.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow..so hot! more please..just break her!!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Killer story! It's my favorite of all these others. And I hope Johnny cheats his friends and keeps the girl for himself. Make her his sex slave please!!!!!! PLEASE?!!!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story and I think that Johnny should take her for himself. The other guys would do it if they were in his place.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Small suggestion, ie. begging) Johnny should betray his friends for some nookie and keep Elisa for himself! THEN she needs to betray his ass and find a way to make them all pay!!!! *Shakes fist* Kickass story.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is super. I think you should definately write it so that he helps her escape and she becomes his. Mybe they even fall in love. I know, I know a bit too romantic. But it could be good.
You're really good a describing the sex scenes!!
You're really good a describing the sex scenes!!
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoI liI like this addition, more than the others, in fact. I think Johnny should blow off his pals and try to keep Elisa for himself... no pun intended ;-) But the other way could still be interesting. Surprise me! I'm still readin!
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
break her ;)
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Strangely enough I really like this! I'm all hot and bothered. ^^