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OOOOO!!!!!!! I ADORED IT!!!! I was also late to work cause of it...but that's ok...I started reading....and got caught up....and by the time I realized what time it was...I was late....
SOOO that means it's a goood story. It's soo sweet, I can't wait to see what happens next! If you can add me to your update list I will adore you forever! How often do you update normally?

mmmmmrgosrgos is tasty. i wouldn't mind an extra serving or two of him in the future. as for my baby Heart, well really sweety, time to recognize a demon when his dick is pointing you in the face. he needs to get hip to the fact that Lazerus wants him to become a flesh and blood sex toy to play with Christian.

as usual this was a brilliant chapter and you know i'm waiting right over here for the next update. i'm also very happy to see the censorship bug that occasionally hits schools did not get the best of you.

Thank you! I really enjoyed your story and hope to see an update real soon! I love your characters and cant wait to find out what happens next.

Thank you

Great fic! ~.^ I think it's really interesting! Keep up the good work!

P.S. Thanks for reviewing "Alone", I really appreciate hearing from readers~.^

I think the story is interesting -- it's always good to have plot with smut I think. But I am confused about the Heart/Lazerous relationship and I'm not sure where this is all going. I look forward to seeing where you decide to take it.

Woohoo! another update, kickass!
I can't even stress how much I adore this fic. Lazerus is starting to creep me out, but he's given me some more insight into their world. So he sired my boy Heart? ewwwww.

He's a bit of a wife beater too isn't he? He wants Christian to love him, but I don't think bitchin him up is the way to do it. Although, to his credit he did fix what he broke.

And nummy, nummy. nummy to you on the tasty little smutlet at the beginning between Heart and Christian. Barring a radical change in his behavior, I hope Lazerus doesn't get Christian. I sm curious a why why Lazerus believes Christian shold remember him. Was he a demon too and he just doesn't remember it? Maybe in a past life? Enquiring mids still wanna know.

Well now, Dear Heart. Since you went to the trouble of reviewing my fic, I came over to take a look at yours. Very interesting. Interesting indeed. I've only read the first chapter, but I likedveryvery much. I hope you've kept Heart out of the beds. I couldn't handle that. Well, I'm off to read another of your delightful chapters.

I just finished reading this story, just couldn't stop. That last lemon was so hot. I love the mystery. You have good grammar making the story easy to read and I like your style. BTW, considering the amount of hits lost when the site had problems, I can tell you to expect close to .01 or .02 percent reviews compared to the number of hits. If you do better than that, you are doing well. However, with all the problems the site has experienced, many reviews never posted, so the numbers should get better. Why do I care? I'm preparing to write a book and want to compare the response to my story with responses to the best on the site. Good luck!

yippee!!! you updated. i am really enjoying this fic. still trying to figure out the Lazerus thing and how he usurped Heart's will. i can't wait to see how Heart will react now that he is no longer pure. will Lazerus ultimately take him over for good? enquiring minds want to know.

update again soon.

Can't wait to read more!!