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for Demon Love Story

by Kugatsu

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I seriously tried... But I absolutely couldn't get into this story at all. I read up until the demon fetchd the green cloak after beating christian. I can't imagine a powerful demon being such a push over & not just taking him. And WAAAY 2 much repetition!!!
person Snowfall
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good luck with your classes and we hope your muse will soon rain on you so that the flower of your imagination will bloom. It is a lovely story. I read up until you killed off hart and then I didn\'t have the \'heart\' to read anymore. It is a very good fic and well written. I\'ll keep checking back.

Snowfall
person bob
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh! christian\' gonna grows horns??? but anyway i luv this story i read it all in one noght please continue and email me when you update!
person Arsinen
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a new reader of yours and fan I want an update as soon as possible this is so good!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!! One of the best Originals I have ever read in my life!!!! Anyways here is my email adress so you can email me when you update this masterpiece JDino83@msn.com. Well see ya when you apdate!!! ^_^ ~Arsinen~
person Apollo
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, a few interesting developments...I like it....I\'m gonna be honest and say it wasn\'t the best chapter I read on this story. It almost seems as if you lost interest in it and are just trying to keep it alive, or like you aren\'t sure where you are going with it. Sorry I pushed for this chapter, please take your time and I\'ll read as you update:) Much love can\'t wait to read more!
person Zephyr
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just read the first (16? 18? something like that) chapters in one sitting. Very nice! It just sucked me in and kept me going until the end of what\'s up so far! Wonderful!

And it\'s good to know I\'m not the only review whore on here! It makes me deliriously happy to get reviews! I know how you feel! ;)

Great story, though! I hope to see an update soon!

**Zeph**
person Apollo
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But...but....what about Heart???? --cries pitiously-- I want more of Heart! How did he do on his first night???
person Tamela
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh so sad!! Poor Chrissy!! I\'m looking for your next chapter!! Thanks!!
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo! my boy Christian is SO gangsta. i can't he just put Lazerus in his place like that. CRAZY...what with the fact that he can kill you with little effort. the i-don't-give-a-firetruck attitude just made Christian extra sexy and Lazerus being punked was Mastercard commercial PRICELESS!

now you know the drill, update pronto. i get cranky without steady infusions of CHL (it sounds like a chemical compound, dah well).
person eurydice's falling
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm a total flake. the review directly above is mine. i forgot to put in my personal info. sowwy.