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for Picnic

by TommyGirl

person moto
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very erotic. A bit disturbing being father and daughter, but very arousing.
person Scrawl42
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let me make one thing clear: I am not giving this a bad review because of it\'s subject matter.
I\'m giving it a bad review because it. REALLY. Sucks.
Seriously. Is English your first language, or are you just a really piss-poor writer?
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sick yet enjoyably sexy! 2 thumbs up!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sick yet enjoyably sexy! 2 thumbs up!
person tdk
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, delicious. Where are all the reviews, this was great?! I love the Japanese spin you took with the plot. Write another please!