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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I felt like I was watching a movie. Where did you come up with this stuff? Wherever you got it, it's really good. Continue? And if you do, I'll bet Aden gets in trouble for not killing the mutant.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I like it! He's a Pet now...hmmm this could get interesting..
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that is one mad story. I love it! All that blood! that would make a wonderful horror movie! I really hope you update this soon, i wanna know what happens!
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Erik.. friggin' creepy. I didn't know you could freak me out like that.. nice job. More chaptersssssss!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start to the story. Very intense. I can't wait for more!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Things are getting very interesting! Where are they and what is happening to all those people? I want to know! Please update soon!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely good for a first submission. Hell it's good for ANY submission.. I can't wait 'til you finish, though. The man in the road, the skeleton, the bus... all evoke a sense of terror not many writers manage to convey. I know, I'm biased, but it's great regardless. FINISH! :D
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome Erik. Of course there were a few grammar and spelling errors, but you knew i would notice them. You are a talented writer, and i'm glad you have more discription in thish ouh out me telling you you need more. please update soon.