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OMG, I am sitting here having a hysterical laughing attack. Thanx EVER so much. Now I'm gonna be going around randomly yelling out "cracker" at prolly really inappropriate moments. You're an evil person, lol. (I guess it's fair payback I have a few readers vowing to hurt ME for locking the phrase "It's just a woodchuck!" in their brains.) I'm still trying to figure the story out but I love the whole bird bit so much I had to take a pause and and tell you how hilarious that bird is. Thanx for the chuckle! I can picture that bird way too well...aurghhhh!

Hey there, i just wanna say that this is a good story, but theres one thing wrong. through out the story you are missing sceanes, like when saphire loses her virginity, i think there was more to chapter 8 as it was called crimson snow when there was nothin in the chapter that said anything about it. and you didn't write when Kai woke from his sleep. it goes right to chapter 9 where it says that he got his ecosystem and was very happy that they retared to the bedroom. the end. but there should be more, like on new years is when he gets his powers back, this is the time where you show off his magic, and when he goes to fight the council. i think this would be awsome if you got this fixed up. please fix this up, then tell me.^^

Ja-Ne =^_^=

Best memorable line in this fic <>

Hehehe ^_^ i loved it anyway

I liked this fic a lot or more than one reason.
1. It was a love story and...
2. It had my favoerite animal/demon in it, Wolves.

Aw, that was SO cute!! Good Job.

that was really sweet nice fic keep writing