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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story, i love the main leads you can feel their how much there love each other n their hurt. i am glad i found this story. hope you update soon.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon I cant wat for the next chapter. This is a great story so far and I really love the flashblacks into the past I really love the flashback to Celinas 14th birthday party! What a sweetie!!!
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. I think you've created a nice, well-rounded set of characters who actually make me care about them and want to learn more about them rather than just scoping the story for the dirty parts. :) I'm loving the slow build up and the steady revelation of this former relationship they shared. I am anxious to see what happened, but at the same time, I'm enjoying the slow tease of finding out the little, intimate things about them. Excellent. Hope to see an update from you soon.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are doing ok. I hope that you didn't put the story off, I really loved it.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love where this is going. Please don't put this off. Update soon!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. OMG!! Please give me some more.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I really hope you will update.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.. wonderful stuff I totally love your story and the fact it\'s an interracial one is an added bonus! (I\'m totally fed uo with the bluehaired blonde eyed mary sues on here) Great stuff hun! Keep writing and I\'ll keep reading! XX
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. There aren\'t a lot of interracial stories on here with black women so this is already has ten points just for that fact alone. Anyway great start, very realistic and please update soon. I\'m eager to know where you\'re going with this.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was just surfing around AFF looking for something to read and I came across this story and it\'s very interesting. I don\'t know when it was started but I really hope that the author finishes it. I\'m really into interracial stories between black girls and white
guys and this story got me hooked. Nowadays it\'s really hard to find a story that keeps you reading but this story has alot of great elements to it and like I said before i hope it gets completed.
guys and this story got me hooked. Nowadays it\'s really hard to find a story that keeps you reading but this story has alot of great elements to it and like I said before i hope it gets completed.