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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hermosa historia y muy caliente, espero muy pronta actualizacion, ana maria
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Screams: Damnit! Please start making an effort to write better. PUNCTUATION! CAPITALIZATION! SPELL CHECK FOR FUCKS SAKE! And that\'s not even meant to be a flame against the actual plot, because that is actually pretty decent. Just beg someone to beta you, please.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, good for a begining...keep going! There is more, right?
Nice work, but a little jumpy...Liz
Nice work, but a little jumpy...Liz
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story i can\'t wait for your next chapter:) please update this story soon:)
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry and post more
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Please continue this story! I would love to read some more.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! WHY ARE YOU STOPPING THERE?!
...Er, could you please continue soon?
...Er, could you please continue soon?
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon. good so far.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dont know what to say.