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for Problems of Attraction

by MadameRuby

person Adrian
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How. Could. You. Not. Tell. Me. About. This?????

Maru, you are a horrible person, but your in luck. I forgive you. And because I was sooooo very nice and forgave you sooo very quickly, you should gimme more! ^-^ More LancexVeldie and more Rydel! ^______^ you KNOWS you want to!

I\'m only sad I had to come snooping around to see if you had updated Blood of my Kin to find this. Horribly horribly saddened.

*holds out hands* but I still luffies you so you should gimme! ^^ me being your wonderuflly hyper friend who- by the by the Chicken and the Egg is a conspericy- has fangies!

Luverly. Write more. ^__~
person Dadella
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*poke*

I want more...

*glares in a very childlike manner*

heh, that being er... said...

I really like how you set this up... It was well written, and the characters, though I know aren\'t completely yours, are really well put together...

I\'d REALLY like for you to write more, but... I guess we can\'t force you, can we?

*pulls out the puppy dog eyes*
person Gothateart/holo aka TkatakiuchiT
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very very interesting, since it's not based on fanfiction. ^___^ Those two characters are so different from each other... I like it how you explain their relationship and attaction to each other. Hehe, a steamy lemon? oooh! I want one!
person Raiju
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes you have another reader, yes you do! I feel so...incomplete! i loathe cliffhangers...*grabs onto her leg and whines and throws a temper tantrum* more! Gimmer more! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE?! *carries on*

Despite the complaining I really loved the first chapter and will be back for more. You can count on it. *nods* Thill gll go places. Literally. No I'm serious...they've already been three places I counted! (that wasn't very funny was it? Ehh, I'm still hyper and I'm sick...>.<) e moe more to it soon!

- Ryoko [Raiju]
person Yasmine
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter, how could you stop there??? XD
It's very interesting, I like it and your writing very much and I'll impatiently wait for the next chapter.
person tinyteeth
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No I wouldn't mind if it was something more, nope wouldn't mind at all. ~crowd chanting in the background "MORE, MORE, MORE"~ lovely so far please continue
person Rory
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me likey so far. Lance/Vel makes for an uber cute pairing. >.< LoL And unfortunately I can't think of anything even remotely intelligent to say, other than good job. Your writing is very good.
person Uli
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heh heh, nice... yah, I sound almost as intelligent as Rory ;) heh heh, kidding! no killies. >.< *lurves yah*

Anyway, keep writing that wonderful smut that we all love so much.

~Uli
person Xylia
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwhwhhahahaha ^^ going to lovedingding this. XD.. yes like Rubychan said anyone steal any character mention they gotta go throught us. MWHHAA *pulls leash on mini Vel.* Bad mini.. he's a little worked up... oh alrighty ^.^ Im off bye bye.
person Sarge
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start, nee-chan^^
I like it, that I do....then again, I've always liked your writing style^^; This one seems...just a tad bit different from normal, some how. I don't know what it is (maybe they haven't raped each other yet? XD) that seems different, but I like it. j00 shall have to tell me when you update, *nod nod*