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for Just for You

by chevonne

person lordmerle
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Smitten!!!! I\'m in friggin\' lust . . . My cock\'s still dripping . . . There\'s nothing unrequited between us now . . . We\'ve now shared a wanton, mutual craving . . . I so hope you felt my tongue on your sloppy cunt . . . You are so damn descriptive . . . I loved it . . . We must do more . . .
person hanyou-elf
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just for you, this is a sensual, erotic, sexy story. you did a wonderful job capturing the turmoil with the main character. the desire to be with a woman, but can't because she is dedicated to her boyfriend. it's a good job. keep it up!
(kisses) and...
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was damn good.