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person pookie
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it's great so far, can't wait until it's updated. Hang in there.

PS you have a great writing technique
person iLuvJaeWon
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is awsome, i wish my mom would marry some dude and then i would have to live with 2 hot! he! hell yeah! i would deffinitly want that! imagine what would happen if we were home alone, maybe a jacuzzi and some stuff...
anyway!!! lol! i really like this story!! keep updating!!!!^_^
person Chez
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story i'm waiting for the next chapetrs to development more of the tensbetwbetween the characters. keep itup, great writing as well, can't wait. NEED MORE
person BladeGirl
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG....i love this sooo much. Wow you guys must have some love life to be able to write friction like that!!! keep it up and remember girls...where protection! ;-) oh and little side note for you tif...lobe
person sourgirl
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Pleeease update soon!