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Freddy, darling,
This just shows how stupid you are. You (and the other names you use) have not harmed me in any way. In fact, dear Frddy, I would be writing another chapter RIGHT NOW if it weren't for a bad case of writer's block.
One thing, though, love, you did make me laugh! You must be a HUGE idiot to confuse my recommended readings with my real stories. You sure took a lot of time to try and insult me. Anyway, cheers. and cheers to the author....I still love this story!!

oh dude..sorry I thought you were someone else that FINKYPUNK fello...sorry...t

POSER! oh you're so hard-core! is that what you want to hear. " I do drugs." that's nothing to brag about loser. You SUCK!

that was really great. for somebody who just started speaking english it's even more impressive. i love your style, too, and your other story that i read was good too ('great sex'), though i have to say i like this one a little bit better. well, good luck at collage, cheers.

xoxoxoxox,
the unmentionable FINKY

VERY good! Great storytelling. Seems like the perfect crime. Keep up the good work.

DUDE. I SO totally agree with the character of this story. That cop should not have died because he was a homosexual, or any other gay person for that fact. Those people who go out of their way to ridicule homos..ew tew them to High Heaven and back!! And if not possible, make them see the error of their closed-minded ways. But murdering them all with a gun shot to the head is a bit blah. Just advice, but if the main character wants to keep killing homo-haters, have him secretly stalk them for a while, find out if they do anything that might endanger their life, like smoking, and have him set their house on fire by a cigarette, so it looks like careless self-endangerment ending in a firey deatust ust a thought. A very powerful story, and if you're going to write more chapters, I'd be very happy if you'd use my idea, but you don't have to. Ja ne...

alexx