rate_review Reviews

Hmm! Sexy, sexy, sexy. More sex between these two please.

I want a bus ride! Are theses two going to end up a couple or are they just gonna bang each others brains out...like I would?

A bus ride was never so hotter!

Sex, sex, sex, sex...now I remembered why I like this so . Lo. Lol. 'Bus Ride' is super hot and sexy and very well written. I really like the unsual relationship Daniel has with this girl. Can't wait for more.

I'm outraged...by how few reviews you have! This story freaking rocks and has definitely captured my attention. I love this highly charged relationship the two have together. And I'm curious about what happens next. Update soon. =)

Hmm, delicious story. Update again soon please.

Hahahahahaha! That was wonderful! Truly. Fun, sexy and you totally tortured the poor guy! Hehehehehe. I love it! Are you gonna post a next chapter or is this one of those teasing, sexy one-shots? Anyway, whatever you will do, I still love this story! It's well-written and has correct grammar. Honestly, most stories here are just a string of words bunched together in a sentence and the authors don't even care if they are written correctly. But yours is different. Hahaha. And I'm honored to be your first review. I wonder if the people here are crazy because they don't read your 'Bus Ride'! Love it. LOL. Sorry if my review is too long but that's me. I can't write a short review. I'm someone of many, jumbled words!!! LOL!