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for Aikou Hateshiganai

by AbstractRainbow

person Cookie
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great cliffhanger good way to build the tension at the end of the chapter makes me wonder what is going to happen to poor Faith!

i hope Lee kills that bastard...

ooooohh.... please more, write more *whining*
person Black Haired Demon
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLZ update this fic I really want to read more. 'Cause this was a very GOOD start for the first chapter.

I hope Faith'll be alright and that bastard of her husband be tought a lesson he'll never forget!!
person Bandit
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOWIE! more more more more ^_^ hurry up and submit more! The suspence is going to kill me.
person rukamichi
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! A very neat beginning. You have a great writing style and a very few grammar mistakes and that makes this a pleasant fic to read. I hope to read more of this fic any time soon.

Ooh yeah... what's the translation of the title..? My Japanese sucks big time ^_^"

Read you soon......