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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven't fotgot you!!!! I haven't beble ble to review for days. Still hooked as ever on this boys adventures and boy does he get around! Wowie!
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, brilliant story! I really envy you your writing talent; you've got a great way of arranging the story, keeping it interesting and varied enough to hold the readers attention, and you write very well, verycripcriptively.
I never thought that you could keep it up for 16 chapters... there was a bit of a dip in the middle, Peggy didn't fit the story I felt. I would have done that as a seperate story; you've had spin-offs from your other stories so why not this one? However thats just my opinion and its a minor thing. In my opinion your one of the best authors on this site and I hope you produce chapter 17 soon!
I never thought that you could keep it up for 16 chapters... there was a bit of a dip in the middle, Peggy didn't fit the story I felt. I would have done that as a seperate story; you've had spin-offs from your other stories so why not this one? However thats just my opinion and its a minor thing. In my opinion your one of the best authors on this site and I hope you produce chapter 17 soon!
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SPANK! SPANK!* After rereading this story and spanking the hell out of my girlfriend, I'm in the mood. Mmmm, every chapter is smutty and delicious. Hot,tie,tie, hot! And please do chapters with fatty chicks. That's my favorite.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll never look at pregnant women the same way again!
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy gets around, don't he? Lol. Great chapter as always.
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! All of your stories are.
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG very interesting fic *panting heavyly* PLZ, PLZ, PLZ continue I WANT MORE MUCH MORE!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS CRAZY STORY!!!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS CRAZY STORY!!!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Since I fanatically follow your other fics I was surprised I had never reviewed this one. sto story is wild and a real turn on. You definitely have a fan in me.