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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is the hot shit. propz.
--Tililia Gangsta [mwahaha im gangster]
P.S.-::points out:: you spelled memoirs wrong lol
--Tililia Gangsta [mwahaha im gangster]
P.S.-::points out:: you spelled memoirs wrong lol
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Maybe it\'s just me, but the self-referencing was a little too... blunt. Rather like a clown whacking me in the face with a board yelling \"Isn\'t this funny?\" Perhaps a more deft touch would have been better, maybe a mention of an idea gleaned from reading too many web stories, instead of just mentioning yourself. It\'s nice to see the guy branching out, I know you/he likes spanking a lot, but if you have too much of a thing, it loses the savory flavor.
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, this is probably one of the best series I\'ve ever read. I love it soooo much! Ohh, do you give spankings in real life? Cause I\'m in dire need of one ;)
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Self-references = fucking hilarious. I love it! XD
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
normally i dont comment but that was amusing bringing yourself into the story like that. pr0pz 2 u! naw seriously it made me laugh...
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that this is definitely getting repetitive now. It's all smack-suck-fuck-assfuck, and I'm sorry to say that it's getting boring. I had the same problem with your story about Samantha, except that had less spanking and more angsting. Don't just drag out stories for the hell of it!
Incidentally, if you end the story with Bill in prison for his activities and getting HIS ass fucked without permission, then I'll love you forever and ever. XD
Incidentally, if you end the story with Bill in prison for his activities and getting HIS ass fucked without permission, then I'll love you forever and ever. XD
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much like your other story about Samantha Parker. It's quite obvious that you have something with large girls and asses. I have enjoyed reading all your stories, although the grammar in A Sexual Memior leaves a little to be desired. I don't know if it was the program you used, but it's screwed up in some places and makes it difficult to understand the intent of the sentence. Other than that, it's a very interesting read and I look forward to more stories from you.
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great! So far it hasn't been very hot, since it's only the first chapter. But it's not going too fast and you actually have grammar skills. :) I'll definitely be reading more chapters.
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before, fat chicks (pleasantly plump) rule! Ask a person who knows. Good fiction.
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Deviant behavior...sexual aggression...Bill's going to wind up getting his ass kicked if he doesn't check himself. One thing I'll note. When you write about some of the women he sleeps with side stories (aka: the victorian time part or Marcy or Peggy..etc) I love that aspect of the story. Side stories are hot!