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for Out of Time

by kaedeyuki

person Daemon
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it is wonderfull. And I am still trying to work out how you do this. have you reserched this topic or what? Oh and pleas dont change the catogory.
person HPkitty
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will be leaving 2 comments. This is the first:
the name VOID and how you described reminds me of Loveless...
Yes that is random. The concept sounds very cool, I can;t wait to read it. Which is what I will be leaving to do right now. ^^
person Caitlin!
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOO! YEAH!! WOOT! That last chapter was the best ;) Awsome story girl! I saved it on my desktop so i\'ll be checking for updates every weekened^^ hee hee
Good luck with the next chapter, your like the best writter i know man! see ya!
person Nautica
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story so far. It's quite intriguing, although I was intimidated by the cast of characters at first.
I absolutely love your gradual unravelling of Kira's psyche. I think you can go many places with this story.

However, I do have a confession to make. I'm not good with keeping up with reviews and chapters. I might begin a story, review a few chapters and never read it again. It's nothing personal. I just get sidetracked and forgetful. On that note, I do encourage you to continue this stort--not to satisfy unworthy fans like me--but for your own self-satisfaction.

Good luck!
Nautica