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It was ok not your best. Please keep emailing when you update. Thanks and keep it up.

The story is still going strong. Keep it up and thanks for emailing me. Please keep it up.

Thanks for your review of Reklats. I don't know if you noticed but I removed it from the site temporarily until I have more chapters. All of my other stories are up and running though. I liked your story very much. It's going somewhere interesting, I can tell. Though I do think that you should get a beta reader. Your spanish to english translation is a little rough and you have a few commen spelling errors. Otherwise I love the story. Jade and Mina are really cool. I think Jade should change back into her miniskirt and leather bra, it'd be a cool outfit to always be wearing and she'd get a lot of looks. * winks * Anyhow, keep it up....I'll be reading. ta

es una conseja muy bueno. me gusta mucho. gracias para el "buena suerte". adios

yo grim reaper. that story is hot. u know who this is .............................................dont u?
hit me bac. ~SaiSaiche

hey.its good so far.wanna read more.keep writing!

The chapter is great. Keep it up and email again when you have it up. Keep it up.

Well, it wasn't too bad. Definately an interesting start. But you might wanna look for a good beta reader/editor. Someone to help you catch all the typos and spelling mistakes I saw. But otherwise, good story.
- Crash

Its a great story. As soon as you update please let mow. ow.

the story is good so far u just need to work on ur spelling and the way u form ur sentences.