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for Ticket to Heaven

by sapphirescimitar

person Mewa
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW!!!!! That was soooooo cute! Almost brought a tear to my eye in the end!
person Joelle
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is some really fantastic characterization in your story. I can picture every one of Jack's evil facial expressions! I can't believe this is the end... Couldn't you write more with these two?!