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for Faccia della Luna

by granate

person Cameron
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story and i thoroughly enjoyed it. keep writing and if its not too much to ask will you continue this fic a lil longer its great.
person lala
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!!!
person William
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked it very good work... now that that is over i do have some thoughts, the interations seem forced and ridged like they have sat on a stick... just saying make them a little more real, but i like it and would like to read more. keep up the good work