rate_review Reviews

@everyone Yes this story could use some work but the whole idea of adultfanfiction.net is for anyone to post any of their witings good or bad. The whole sense of negativity of the reviews I just read are uncalled for. "Be constructive or shut up" is a saying that applies to most of the people who reviewed this story. Besides, if you actually look past the spelling and some of the phrases it feels a little like the way old style fairytales are written, in other words, it has a classical feel to it. As for those who are complaining about how angels are neither male or female, this is a fiction story, as in made up.

@LilRainbowBoy just ignore all the flamers. If you want to write, write and post it here. That is what this place if for.

I couldn't read this at all. The typos and un-seriousness of this story bothered me. There are no actual paragraphs and the language used is very net-speak and not story like.

Oh, wow! This puts J.K Rowling to shame! "yes now we must have buttsex" ? Where did you pull that line from? Also, if you knew anything about Christianity, you would know that there is no gender in H(note the capital)eaven. Ranting complete.

ROTFL buttsex!!!!
OMG how old are you?
That was halarious! I can only picture myself asking my mate for some buttsex, LOL

Im with everyone else here... What the Fuck?

this was really off....by a mile... the spelling... the story....just all of it

Ok, I try not to leave mean reviews, but....you might want to whip out a dictionary right about now because I'm going to be using some big words.

That was absolutely horrendous. How old are we? Your spelling and grammar are abominable. Can we say spell check? You have no idea how banal and insipid you just made yourself sound. It took longer than necessary to read just trying to figure out what you meant from your spelling mistakes.

I sincerely hope this was a joke because it that was an conscientious effort it was atrocious.

On the plus side at least you haven't had the audacity to write something else so thank you for that.

I.. hope this was meant to be a weird.. um.. joke..?

I dunno..seemed really stupid and cheesy. I hope you weren't trying too hard..

... This was extremely retarded, and the spelling sucks. Aside from the "buttsex" a child you have wrot. Th. Though...the last part about God being gay made me laugh my ass off, because I now have an image of God carrying around a rainbow flag and promoting "buttsex" ,so thank you ever so much for that.

Do you speak English? At all?