rate_review Reviews

First and foremost, I must congratulate you. Even though this is a rather bloody story I still find it well written, and very thought through. You have developed the plot well and I think the characters are all well developed as well. The only thing that has bothered me slightly is the relationship between Mackenzie and Katya, for some reason that seems to be moving douple speed compared to the rest of the story, and that Mackenzie appears to be awfully open to Katya even though he seems to be rather guarded around others. Of course I haven\'t read the whole story yet, so I might be terribly off with these remarks.
Oh, and the language what you use is very expressive, full of synonumes and different structures, excellent job!
~D~

I was so happy to see that you’ve updated. This is another good chapter and your grammar has improved greatly. I like where this story is going so far. Don’t feel pressured to update because now I know you have like five other stories to update as well. You should have the confidence in your abilities especially in writing. Thanks for updating until next time.

Wow, your story is wicked and you said it was your first try at something dark like this. Well, you are doing an excellent job. I had to review to make sure you update soon. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes but it is so trivial. Don\'t worry about it because it is not hindering the flow of your story. I\'ve never read anything like this but I like it. I think Kat needs to eat something before she faints. A disturbing story but Please update soon.

You have a great idea and a good plot going. I definitely want to see more, but your spelling and grammar could use a little bit of work. Please continue writing.

I doubt that it will go sour, although I am no expert, I just read what I like, and I love your story. As for this chapter, I felt it was very heart felt, and you put alot of feeling into your characters. Oh, and by the way, great sex scene, was very good. ^_^ Hope to see the next chapter ASAP, and shall rate every chapter from here on.

This story is amazing.
You write so well and all the characters have such distinct personalities its fantastic!
Please keep writing, i\'m dieing to find out what happens next.

You have to continue with the story, Or I may die from worry! I wanna know what happends to her! ::Shakes the person by the shoulders.:: ...::Stops.:: Uhm, I like the way you write, and I love the story thank you.

SAT: Sick and Twisted. Even I'm not that psycopathic. But I mean it in a good way. So you're writing a fic that includes Vampyres and Lycans too. Cool. Well, write chapter 5 soon. One'vingos (goodbye).

Alexx