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I am so happy to see you’ve updated. Don’t worry about a fast update I can completely understand when life takes over. As much as I like Drum I’m really glad he and Kat did not have sex because I like MacKenzie much more with Kat. You are a good writer in this kind of genre, seriously you are because I usually wouldn’t read all of this kind of violence and sex. MacKenzie needs to get rid of Niki and Templer in my opinioin. When I have questions in a story that’s actually a good sign for me to keep reading it so it has nothing to do with your writing. If you give up on writing or on sharing your creativity with readers than I would be really upset. The only way I can show my appreciation for your writing is reviewing and this one is a pretty long review:) If you feel no one appreciates your work well I do. One is better than none:) Thanks for updating.

I truly love your show of blood play. You\'re magic with the words...and I find your first chapter girl and mine much simmilar. Especially with the episode with the mouse. The only thing is, mine has yet to discover she is the villin. I doubt ill ever make her out to be a true villan. Anywho, Im suspicious...Are the nicki girl and the girl from the prologue the same person?

Email me back...and if you want to read more on the story I have, I\'ll send it to you. I have two more chapters that i have yet to put up.

fabulous and beautiful as always

Glad to see you’ve updated. Another good chapter with a little romance but this chapter just fuels me with more questions to ask you. For example, why is Drum against MacKenzie helping Kat relieve her pain and Drum also said, “you know what will happen.” What does Drum mean by that? Sorry I just have so many questions but I picked these two instead. I know you will eventually answer them in upcoming chapters. Thanks for updating.

Wow! This is a great story. \"She Said What\" and \"Bound in Leather\" were the first of your alternative HP works that I\'ve read, and now I read this original work. My compliments a for well written look into a world of darkness and light. I look forward to reading more of this story.

I was ecstatic to see that you have updated. It\'s another good chapter and finally a hint on MacKenzie’s past. I like your new character Drum and he seems fearless. You are great with character and scene descriptions. I will wait patiently for the next chapter to see if MacKenzie will respond to Kat’s questions. I don\'t know why but I get the feeling that MacKenzie and Kat have known each other in the past before. By the way I like the title for this chapter. Thanks for updating.

this fic is just too awesome

Yes, that dream told me alot, and im starting to see alot of it fall into place, but not the whole picture, I can only guess..sadly. I would like to tell you that this chapter was good, but I was expecting her and mac to atleast kiss. >.< Lol, oh well cant get everything in life, maybe later on. *Shrugs.*
Thanks for the good reads, and update soon.

Wow! I\'m really liking this story so far! I hope you plan on updating very soon! I\'m thinking I figured out how the prologue relates to everything...Yay for me!!

Once again, thank you for anouther piece of the story. I really enjoyed it very much, and I thought it was, as all of the other chapters, very well written. This chapter enlightened my view on the story, and fit a whole bunch of the missing puzzle pieces together perfectly. *Hops up and down with excitement.* I cant wait for the next chapter, please hurry as fast as you can, but dont rush yourself on account of me. Update asap, thank you so much.