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Update soon please as I am hooked on your story.
Why does the dead jogger look like MacKenzie??
Will Katya be stong enaought to survive the meeting with Judas.
Will she "become" Mac's Blood Mate for real?????
Great Story !!!!

Hi, just wanted to tell you that I stumbled across this fic today and was utterly hooked! I hope you keep going with it - I can't WAIT for the next chapter!! I'm really impressed, and I am sure you'll fulfill your ambition to be published one day soon!
Cariad xx

I'm glad to see you back and as good as ever. Yep, you sure did answered some questions. I think in this sentence, "I don't blame you, Dare." I think you meant Mac. I think Katya being able to read minds is awesome and I think she use to be Fia in another life time or something like that. Thanks for updating.

Wow. I really can't say enough good things about this. Yes, it is very twisted and macabre. You have to be very morbid and able to stomach a lot of things to enjoy this story, but the benefits outweigh all that. First of all, I love the characters. THey are each unique and interesting. And Katya is easily desired by everyone without being a mary-sue. At least by my knowledge. The only criticism I have is a slight change of past tense to present tense somewhere towards the end of an earlier chapter. It was so minute that I barely noticed it. I'm not one to criticize, seeing as I would not be able to write this near as well. The idea is interesting, and the writing is superb. It really pulls you in and keeps you. I unfortunately have to get some sleep before I pass out or I would read it in one sitting. Very good work. The only thing I couldn't stomach very easily was the mouse at the very beginning. That made me cry. But then again, I'm a wimp when it comes to crying. And that story just adds to the purpose of the story. Please continue your writing. You're very talented.

~Alison

UPDATE!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!

wow really really good.please continue the story.i cant wait to find out whats happening to katya and when niki gets killed!i hope soon..

............*looks around* You...have me completely speechless....I am in love with this story...and I know what you mean by it just takes you with it... in my story my characters changed all the time and by the end...I had my reads suprised! You...wow the sex scenes are very well written! I LOVE DRUM! He is my favorite so far...and my second is Mac he is so understanding...but I want to make sure they are want I think their personality is first before i make anymore asumptions....I am kinda confused and kinda there...there is just tons of missing peices that I am waiting for you to pass out.....sooo please update soon...I see you haven't in almost 2 months!!! Oh well I love the story so I will hopefully encourage you to do more! I beg you!! lol Nice work hun!!

Mal

I am relatively new to fanfics, but to me this seemed more of an actual book than anything I have read of this nature so far. The characters have been given quite a lot of detail, from appearances to backstories, And I have enjoyed every moment of reading this. In all honesty, I did not budge a muscle from the computer until I had finished every chapter that was so far posted. I also must commend you on your darker senses, especially when it comes to Niki. She seems to act exactly as a spoiled child would if denied what she desired. With a touch of sadistic intelligence, of course. I can not say that I especially like gore, but it fits so bloody well into the story line you've created. Don't change a bit, no matter who criticizes you. It caters to my dormant darker side so beautifully...

Reviewing chapter 8, HAPPY NEW YEAR! I decided to check to see if you've updated and you did but you did a while ago. Sorry it took me so long to review. I'm so impress with your writing. Drum's past was very well done. I like how you added the Old English (I think) and his thoughts of his past in the story. I feel sorry for Drum. I can't wait to read the next chapter because of this impending talk that Katya and Mac has. I wonder what Mac did to Katya. There may also be the impending war among the vampires as well. How exciting I can't wait for the next chapter. Good chapter and thanks for updating:)

This is such a great story... I love it... please keep it up!