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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! So far I am absolutely loving your fic. I'm constantly hunting for material to sate the darker side, and you and your fic have done much more than that! I am enthralled. If it were a book, I'd finish in one night! Keep it up!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eh, please accept my apology for not getting this review to you sooner.
I love the internal dialogue of the shapeling. It pulls at the heartstrings.
So much need. What is great is that it isn’t a mindless beast after a good fuck.
It is trying to save its people. I feel sorry for him.
He says that she is ‘human, but not’. Finding out what she is will be interesting
and, hopefully, very fun.
Oh my, how romantic is the picture that you paint of Katya and Mac.
You might love blood and gore, but you are all mush inside, aren’t you?
Thanks for the description of Mac. Ooooh, he sounds so sexy!
The whole tongue kiss just about made me soak my chair.
Where’s a tongue when you need one! Sigh Hmmm
I do want to mention that I love the descriptive words and
verbs that you used in the lemon:
‘Then his hands climbed up her back’ [[climbed]]
‘A whirlwind of feelings tore through her body, bringing each and
every sense alive.’ [[whirlwind]]
‘And then his tongue slipped in past her lips.’
[[ Ooooh, wet and slippery and…ohhhh]]
‘she would have slithered to the ground in a puddle of mush’
[[slithered]]
‘each time dipping a little deeper’ [[dipping like an oil stick]]
‘the sound thrilling her’ [[thrilling]]
‘kissing a hungry path’ [[need I say more? Very visual]]
‘Fine shivers chased up and down her spine’ [[chased]]
Because of how you link them together, we can feel, hear, see the surroundings
in such a vivid manner.
What a friggin’ daymare! Gah! And, damn! It interrupted our lemon!!!
I’m going to get you for that. Just you wait and see. Uh huh. Well, I guess
we did get a few orgasms out of the darker parts.
So, Katya seems to be able to travel into the past, or into someone else’s memories.
Very interesting, Watson. Goodness, I need to go back and read the story again.
Yes, you just had to leave us on a dark and twisted note. Can’t go without that.
Niki needs to feel some serious pain. I hate that bitch.
I love Drum though. He’s a sweetie. Don’t you dare kill him off!
Ah, my little popette. I forgive you for the oversight on describing our
beautiful vampire. I don’t know if you have made any changes since the first
time I read this chapter, but it flowed very nicely. Maybe it was the
drugs talking.
Well, Je t’aime, mon ami. ^_^
Snow
I love the internal dialogue of the shapeling. It pulls at the heartstrings.
So much need. What is great is that it isn’t a mindless beast after a good fuck.
It is trying to save its people. I feel sorry for him.
He says that she is ‘human, but not’. Finding out what she is will be interesting
and, hopefully, very fun.
Oh my, how romantic is the picture that you paint of Katya and Mac.
You might love blood and gore, but you are all mush inside, aren’t you?
Thanks for the description of Mac. Ooooh, he sounds so sexy!
The whole tongue kiss just about made me soak my chair.
Where’s a tongue when you need one! Sigh Hmmm
I do want to mention that I love the descriptive words and
verbs that you used in the lemon:
‘Then his hands climbed up her back’ [[climbed]]
‘A whirlwind of feelings tore through her body, bringing each and
every sense alive.’ [[whirlwind]]
‘And then his tongue slipped in past her lips.’
[[ Ooooh, wet and slippery and…ohhhh]]
‘she would have slithered to the ground in a puddle of mush’
[[slithered]]
‘each time dipping a little deeper’ [[dipping like an oil stick]]
‘the sound thrilling her’ [[thrilling]]
‘kissing a hungry path’ [[need I say more? Very visual]]
‘Fine shivers chased up and down her spine’ [[chased]]
Because of how you link them together, we can feel, hear, see the surroundings
in such a vivid manner.
What a friggin’ daymare! Gah! And, damn! It interrupted our lemon!!!
I’m going to get you for that. Just you wait and see. Uh huh. Well, I guess
we did get a few orgasms out of the darker parts.
So, Katya seems to be able to travel into the past, or into someone else’s memories.
Very interesting, Watson. Goodness, I need to go back and read the story again.
Yes, you just had to leave us on a dark and twisted note. Can’t go without that.
Niki needs to feel some serious pain. I hate that bitch.
I love Drum though. He’s a sweetie. Don’t you dare kill him off!
Ah, my little popette. I forgive you for the oversight on describing our
beautiful vampire. I don’t know if you have made any changes since the first
time I read this chapter, but it flowed very nicely. Maybe it was the
drugs talking.
Well, Je t’aime, mon ami. ^_^
Snow
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that chapter I did. I am just getting excited for Kat and Mac action! :) keep 'em coming!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!! You haven't updated for AGES..... do you think you will be one day? I really like this story, so it's in my favourites and I check it every now and then....
If you don't intend to, let me know so I can make up my own ending an move on lol!
Polly xx
If you don't intend to, let me know so I can make up my own ending an move on lol!
Polly xx
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so fucking good! I would do an indepth review, but I've spent hours reading this and it's late. You have all the elements of a fic that I enjoy; action, suspense, mystery, sex of course, and believe it or not, there is romance. And it is all done superbly. You are building it at a nice even pace; not too slow and not too fast, just right.
I only have one complaint. I haven't the foggiest idea what Mac looks like so it is not possible for me to see a picture of him and Kat together. Call me spoiled. I like to see imaginary lovers. Hehe.
This story just sucked me right in. I love the way that you didn't drag us through a mountain of description before dropping us into an actual event. That's the way that I, personally, prefer it. Otherwise, my attention wanes very quickly. Great job!
I hope that you continue to update regularly. *dancing in place, waiting for next chapter*
Snow
I only have one complaint. I haven't the foggiest idea what Mac looks like so it is not possible for me to see a picture of him and Kat together. Call me spoiled. I like to see imaginary lovers. Hehe.
This story just sucked me right in. I love the way that you didn't drag us through a mountain of description before dropping us into an actual event. That's the way that I, personally, prefer it. Otherwise, my attention wanes very quickly. Great job!
I hope that you continue to update regularly. *dancing in place, waiting for next chapter*
Snow
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Niki has killed a Mac look a like so is that important for us readers to pick up on or was it just a coincidence? As much as I like Drum I was like no don't go any further with Kat, haha. I like how you have the believer in vampires and werewolves perspective and nonbeliever perspective. It amazes me how inform you are of the things you have put in each chapter. Thanks for updating.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished chapters 1 - 3 and can tell you that I am loving your story.
I like your characters and your storytelling.
On to chapter 4......
I like your characters and your storytelling.
On to chapter 4......
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
re chap 4 - I love intelligent conversations.
The love the growing bond between Kat & MacKenzie.
Great writing....
The love the growing bond between Kat & MacKenzie.
Great writing....
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like Drummond - he feels like the type of character that could become her "big brother".
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Drum,
Both he and MacKenzie are so lonely and filled with pain,
I hope Kat can sooth thier souls.....
Both he and MacKenzie are so lonely and filled with pain,
I hope Kat can sooth thier souls.....