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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... i really love this story! I think its my favorite... It soooo cute! ^_________________^! *huggles jacob*
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story line is really good so far =) i really like how short the chapters are. Of course, if i was waiting for updates... the well, that is a different story lol. =D
there are some grammar and speeling errors that really detract for the story. Sometimes it is hard to read because of them. Most likely they are fine on Word or Note pad whatever you use... but when transfered to AFF they mess up. Speaking of that... i think i need to fix some.. crap. lol
Anyway. Just thought i would let you know. It is really good so far. i like!
*Silent Writer*
there are some grammar and speeling errors that really detract for the story. Sometimes it is hard to read because of them. Most likely they are fine on Word or Note pad whatever you use... but when transfered to AFF they mess up. Speaking of that... i think i need to fix some.. crap. lol
Anyway. Just thought i would let you know. It is really good so far. i like!
*Silent Writer*
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch.9... I LIKEY! =)
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch. 10... yay! =) i like it so far i cant wait to read more!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch.19... how could he accept that she had sex with Sphinx? or at least THAT easily!!! cant wait to read the rest!!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch. 21... awesome fic. But, i thought that werewolves and humans couldn\'t have children...
anywho!
great fic! loved it... now i will start to read the sequel...
awesome job once again!
*Silent Writer*
anywho!
great fic! loved it... now i will start to read the sequel...
awesome job once again!
*Silent Writer*
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sounds really good so far... i\'ll be reading this one more when i have more time!
I wanted to thank you for your review on \'Lucinda\" and a french accent oooo i like that!!
I have a question to ask also...
I\'m trying to write a werewolf/vampyre story that is in my world of the Macabre Court.
I don\'t know a lot about werewolves and i really don\'t want to write one out of character.
Is it possible that you would be willing to assist me?
If not that is fine thank you for reading this!
Can\'t wait to read more of your fiction!
*Silent Writer*
I wanted to thank you for your review on \'Lucinda\" and a french accent oooo i like that!!
I have a question to ask also...
I\'m trying to write a werewolf/vampyre story that is in my world of the Macabre Court.
I don\'t know a lot about werewolves and i really don\'t want to write one out of character.
Is it possible that you would be willing to assist me?
If not that is fine thank you for reading this!
Can\'t wait to read more of your fiction!
*Silent Writer*
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww. That was a perfect way to end the story. I was wondering if you really would make her a werewolf/tiger/s... ... thing or not, but I'm kinda glad that you didn't. I think that you should write a sequal. E-mail me if you want to hear my ideas. Also e-mail me if you want a beta reader. I would be more than happy to volunteer.
Nikki
Nikki
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You just ruined the happiness with Sandra fucking his ex's. BAH!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, i wish i had that sort of imagination ^_^