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for once upon a yesterday

by gypsyqueen

person Yasmine
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO KILL ME AND MANY OTHERS!
I guess I'm becoming a really big worshipper of yours because you're brilliant.
person Fate
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot i love it! Nice and slashy, just i l i like it ^^ *content sigh* I like blake, there's just somthing about him that appeals to me..Though all the charaters are pretty cool. Please contuine to write this!
person Jiro
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Finally something remotely sexual!!!! I love your stories precisely because they actually have a _plot_... but I prefer to read them after a few chapters have been posted so I can get to the *ahem* "good stuff". Lol. That's a compliment though... or at least it was meant as one. You write slash so WELL!!! I can't wait to read more! This is awesome!!!
person cyclopscat
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why doesn't Wesely (I'm Probably butchering his name...) know that he's gay?!? He needs to figure it out DAMN fast so he can play with Jesse. I liked the beggining of this chapter *purrrrs* I wish Jesse wasn't such a five year old though..../. silly boy.... WRITE MORE!! PLEASE!!!
person Jiro
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like Jesse and Blake. I like the getting along idea. They should ALL get along. Definitely.
person cyclopscat
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is no perhaps. You will continue or I will perish. You don't want that on your concience do you? No, you dont. Wes and Jesse are going to get together and have LOTS of babies and it will be WONDERFUL. The End. ...... I like the story btw. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!
person Fairyflame
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
most excellent! I look forward to reading more as soon as possible.
person fakegirl23
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You wrote it! It's awesome, you're a great writer( I read Nothing False, too). Please kep updating this often.
person Lady MacAbee
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Write more, darling. I need it!
person Full_Circle
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, very well written. It's too soon to say anything else though. I definitely enjoyed reading it, and I'm looking forward to reading more. please update soon!