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for once upon a yesterday

by gypsyqueen

person A. Stone
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yum....that is all i have to say.......PEACE! ^.^ V...k guess i had that to say too...my bad
person Fate
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fucking woot! amazing smutness! *dances* and you've been sick o_O you poor thing! *huggles author and pats soothingly* there there you poor little smut writer you..I'm sure the god of yaoi will see you in your illness and make thinsg better. he likes us yaoi writers ^^ anyway. Hot. Very Nice. Writing makes you feel better :P
person jillij
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
stunning...absolutely stunning...i loved it!
person Fate
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay now listern here sweety. I feel i have been waiting long enough for a new chapater of this wonderful story you have me addictived too. *Grabs the leather strap that she herself was threatend with not so long ago* Now i'm not afaird to tan your hind, if you do not swifty and surly update this story. *raises a brow and cracks strap againts palm* now its all your own fault. If you wheren't such a good author i wouldn't have to do this but as it is *sighs* write. Now. Update or. *cracks strap againts palm again* i think i have said enough. ^^
person Saetan
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeee! This is such a good story so far! The writing is awesome, and you have a great idea of all the characters! Only thing that bothers me is.. .. Wesley changing his mind about Jesse within less than a chapter... I mean, yeah, they molested each other on the dance floor, but it seemed Wesley was hanging out with Amanda at the end of the scene and undecided about Jesse. Then next time we find them.. .. Wesley is sporting a hard on. Nm. Great story though, if you want to talk my aim is Nelo Anjello and I love to bother- I mean.. . talk to authors. :D;;;
person Jiro
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I, for one, would definitely like you to write about Blake getting fucked over a coffee table... It sounds promising ^_^ This was another great chapter. They're father seems very open minded, all things considred. Please update soon! This fic ROCKS!!!
person Alexx the Hopeless
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o_O.....wtf?....whatever -__-;....
person Nina Leonae
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::gasp:: You made him go to church? That was mean! Ahah. Made me giggle, though.

::sigh:: Kitty, you are always so silly. :) As an ofn of good faith make the boys do something in the pool. Oh, and spank that naughty little muse for me. She's been a bad bunny. Love you bunches.

Nina L.

person Will
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story post more... also where can i get an ass biting muse... i want one lol lol
person Yasmine
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yipee! I can't wait for the morning.
Poor Wes, having to go to sleep with a case of "blue balls". Jesse'd better make it up to him later.
I can't wait for more!!
*hugs*