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for Closer

by ScarletIbis

person animegirl007
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My only complain is that it was too short....and what happen to them in the past flashback...did they do the deed or what ???? Did mom come home early?????? other then that I still love it...and will only leave a review when I see your story.....I\'ll be waiting for your update......
person animegirl007
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh-oh !!! This should be a interesting night ...as long as her mother doesn\'t come home early!!!!!......Now remember what I said before,...people will read your story but for some reason are to lazy to write a review...rememeber don\'t get upset and keep writing ....I love your story, and I can\'t wait for more.....update soon
person Tirch
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know I think your story is excellent. Your writing style keeps me on the edge of my seat. I feel like I\'m being teased with little bits of information because of the future/past format. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!
person L
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
People are review-phobic around here! We can\'t do anything about that, tho. I like your story :), tho it\'s moving kind of slow but I\"m not one to complain.
person animegirl007
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been a long time.....update again soon.....
person dewy
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is great. i love it. keep up the good work.
person animegirl007
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I know things happen....I\'m just glad you didn\'t give up on the story....great chapter...update when you can.......
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this! The end of chapter 8 rocked my socks off!
person animegirl007
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TOO SHORT...BUT YOU KNOW WHAT....UPDATE SOON......
person animechick262003
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Sean touching himself. NICE! This is definitely one for the erotica! Nice Job!