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It\'s been over two months since you update and I really want you to continue and finish the story. It\'s a great one. Plus, there are so many questions that have yet to be answered. Please update soon! :-)

I am so glad you updated. It was well worth the wait. Keep up the good work. Now chop chop, off to work on the next chapter you go.:) :) I can\'t wait to see what happens between Sean and Rosalyn, I just hope its a happy ending with plenty of beautiful babies. *hint*hint*

amazing, when I first came to this site I was hoping for some orgasmic smut stories, but this, this is better than any fic I\'ve ever read. it\'s so hard to find good original stories like this where the female character is african-american. this story is great,keep writing.

what can I say? that was some sweet shit dude!!! keep on with ya bad self!

I just discovered this story today and I have to say that this had me hooked from the beginning. I myself am African-American and I love reading about interacial pairings. There aren\'t nearly enough :sigh: What makes it even cooler is the fact that the woman is the person who\'s black. You don\'t read much about white guys going with black women, mostly the other way around and so this is something refreshing to me. Keep up the good work and don\'t worry so much about reviews, think of it as people don\'t have too many problems with your story so they don\'t feel the need to say anything. It could also be laziness but I just don\'t want it to get you down. Keep it up.

This is such a short yet sweet chapter that is important b/c it shows the dept of their relationship. In many romance stories that I read a scene like this is left out. Yet, I believe the \"afterglow\" scene is just as important as the love scene itself. This scene shows that they are not just having sex just to be having sex. They care for each other. Also, this scene just adds to their character development. You add details to your story which I believe is just as important as the story itself.
Plus, I want to thank you too, for writing such a great story. If you need any advice just drop me an email. :-)

Hi Scarlet

I like your original and your spuffy stuff, but I just wanted to suggest getting a beta. You have great ideas but I see a lot of spelling errors. They are just things that an extra set of eyes could pick out for you. I think you might be able to pick up one from http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AFFBetaReaders.

I beta might also be someone to help you flesh out your ideas or just be a sounding board for your plots.

Dee

Okay Scarlet!

In Chap 4 the line \"never underestimate the power of the man\"

that was just hillarious!!! I laughed out loud.

Dee

Okay
I have finished all 17 chapters and I really did enjoy them. The virgin sex scene was sweet and not to over the top. It was very realistic. Car sex was a little carnal and not inappropriate in the story. The last chapter was cute and I am looking forward to you finishing the story.

I was wondering if you could post what exactly \"lemon\" means. I don\'t have a clue. As far as your sex scenes go, for this site I would actually say they are pretty mild. I enjoy your story telling, though cause that is seriously laking around these parts!

Dee

I love this story! It\'s intense. It\'s a romance story with a touch of ghettoness to it that I love. Ros keeps it real. I don\'t think you need to change a thing. They are together, I\'m happy. Now, will Ros\' mother cause trouble for the happy couple. Will the job and the people they work for get in the way of their love? Will some guy or girl get bt. them? You have so many directions to go in. Also, will she get pregnant. I really think should at least get pregnant at least in the epligoue. There must be an epilgoue. I love your love scenes too. They are intense, sexy, and romantic all at the same time. Whether they are quick or slow, they\'re good. Hope my ideas help and I can\'t wait for an update. P.S. I think they should be happy for awhile though before you bring another conflict in. They need a little peace, plus of course some more flash backs.