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for Clean Cut

by Scribe

person MelanthaNocturne
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story Scribe. I really think that, if given to the right publisher...well you know. Anyway, I love it a lot and I want to thank you for showing me a RL Bondage-ish relationship. It was enlightening. ^_^ Please write another? I\'ve already found myself starting fanfic for these...o.O;;

Please E-mail me! ^___~
~Melantha
\"If ignorance is bliss then you must be ORGASMIC!\"~one of my favorite insults.
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it! There must be more (well, not must but it would be nice) I love those two. =^^= Keep it up.
person Arabwel
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.... so cute! I just love these two, they make me melt.... great work!
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! I really really like it! I have read both of them ^_^

I was wondering, this is going to sound wrong no matter HOW I say it but. I remember that guy in the first fic Clean Sweep. When Trent went to France (I think that was where he went...) and he was raped by that guy. \'t \'t remember his name) I seem to remember him saying he was going to be in Trent\'s town the year after and would stop by for a viset. Now I know he probably wouldn\'t be that stupid after what Clive did to him. But, I was thinking for maybe another story or a later chapter to this fic. He could show up again, and not plane on seeing Trent again, but he sees him when he is walking to the club. And so on and so forth.

To tell the truth, I like rape fics. Every one has there own view of what could happen after a rape. I find them very intresting. And this sounds song ong every time I say it but, I like it when my fave charaters get hurt...but not to baddly. As long as there is a happy ending I don\'t mind ^-^ any way! It was just a sugesting!
person karisma
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEE!* The boys are back! Yay! Thank God Clive finally around to asking! YAY! You know I love these guys so much. And though I wouldn\'t DARE ask or want you to change ANY of it, just an FYI... without the mentions of Metropolis, this could be a real, actual factual book. I\'d totally buy it hard-cover!
person clonesofconfusion
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very sweet, i love your work. we normally don\'t like oc\'s or maryss s but we love all yours!!
person Akurei
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I hope you update soon.
person Arabwel
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOddess. That\'s what you are. I love this. I need a thesaurus to express in as many ways as I can how brilliant tis..is... more?
person EmpathyBlue
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i remeber reading this story and Clean Sweep at ff.net (i think that\'s where it was at least...) in the original form, and i was kinda sad at the way it just ended. i\'m really liking being able to go back and see chapters that elaborate. :hugs: i can honestly say that i love you, lol. keep it up!!
person Wolfess
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I love your story so far...I\'ll keep reading...^_^ I\'m actually gonna go check out some of your other stories in a lil bit. *nods*