rate_review Reviews

NOOOO!!!! This is where you cut us off! I needs me another hit! I like this story, and I really like Bryant- is it wrong that I now have a crush on a fictional literary character? I was glad that it was him, and not Clive, what beat the hell out of Pri, good choice because I liked that scene of vengance. Bryant, like Clive and Trenton, is a very well written character- you've given him good depth, created a good character. You've done an excellent job showing his inner dialogue and attitudes- he is very believable. I like it.

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* HE SAID IT! HE SAID "Honey, I'm home!" I almost fell off my chair from laughing so hard! It's brilliant! It's adorable! It's wonderful and so damn cute! And it's amazing what I pick up when I reread things...38, eh? Hmmmm.... And they do have a second room in the appartment? I'm thinking that my story is a few years down the road for Clive and Trent. Nice little tidbits for me... I'm so happy you updated. I was in real need for some new Clive/Trent interaction. I am happy now! Good luck with that month long thingy you do which I cannot spell. Nanirimo...something or other. OTHER being the choice word here. :) You are a very brave woman!

ta ta!

Cassandra

This, as well as it's prequel, is a very good story. I usually only have time to read stories with specific pairings in certain fandoms. But, I recently took some extra time to check out originals and am glad that I did. I have enjoyed both pieces so far and look forward to seeing how this one turns out. Thank you for sharing.

I think I just shaved a couple of functional years off of the deskchair...I saw your update an jumped up and down...with a lot of protesting noises from the chair ;)

So, Trenton is all settled already *bg* now lets see how things with Priory are going to turn out. Update soon!

I hear the Ominous Music Orchestra tuning up! Duck and roll, Bri! Run in a zig-zag pattern! This is great, as always. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part!

I love you. Please update more often! *sigh*

~*GypsyQueen*~

u FINALLY updated!!! yay! that was soooooo great!!!! i loved it!!! i cant wait for the confrontation btn PRi and bryant... im sure its gonna b eventful!! im so pumped, write more please!

I LOVE this chapter to peices, merely because Clive is so..er..serious,I guess. I dunno, he\'s just different in this. I love more. :P Who wouldn\'t?

I\'m just curious. Are you finished with this story? I imagine you COULD leave it where it\'s at...but are you? I mean, there could be more run-ins with Priory..or something. Eh,I\'m just not sure. If you can, could you email me, or let your reviewers know if you ARE finished?

I\'m rereading this for about the...erm....12th time,I think. I feel so bad for poor Bryant sometimes. >,< Damnable Priory. At least I know the ending. XD