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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and the one that came before it. I've never really been in D/S stories, but yours intrigued me. It actually inspired me to try writing my own. I really loved Trent and Clive. They're such a cute pair.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can so review this one for you, just in case no one else has reviewed any for you to see the new review thing. I so love this story.. I so want to vist....
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter! I really am very glad that you are continuing this again! I always love to read about Bryant, Trenton and Clive, as well as all the characters you\'ve created. You could seriously publish this saga, really!!
\"I wish you hadn\'t told me that. Now I\'m going to have to start thinking up \'prick\' double entendres.\"\'
Best line ever! XD ROFL!
\"I wish you hadn\'t told me that. Now I\'m going to have to start thinking up \'prick\' double entendres.\"\'
Best line ever! XD ROFL!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am more or less obsessed (probably not healthy considering they\'re fictional characters) and heartbroken over the prospect that it had to end. That was definately a kick ass story and I\'m very grateful that you both thought it up and posted it. The characters and the interaction between them was wonderful. I\'ve gone about this all backwards but I have to go read Clean Sweep now. Thanks a lot.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Scribe! I can\'t believe that I just stayed up all night reading another one of your wonderful fics, well actually since this is like the 5th one... I guess I can! ^_^ I hope you update this soon, I love the stories and what you\'ve done with the characters. I guess while you\'re updating I\'ll just re-read it again!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I just wanted to tell you that I\'ve loved the stories you written especially this one. Please update!! :)
I just wanted to tell you that I\'ve loved the stories you written especially this one. Please update!! :)
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love you, Scribe. i\'m now systematically going through all of your stories. i absolutely loved this one, no surprise there. you write so well, your descriptions are so good and your characters are wonderful. i really want to find out what happens at the end of this story, so please continue. many thanks ~~harpling
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good to see Bryant coming into his own. I also look forward to seeing how the couch will have to answer to Clive for his behavior towards Trendon.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated. I really like this story. You\'re characterizations of Bryant\'s toxic relationship was really good. But can Clive kick Priory\'s ass? Pleeaase?
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-=Cough=- Now seriously, Scribe, dear. Where is the rest of this story? I\'ve read it and reread it. Both parts. And I\'ve YET to see an update. What\'s going to happen between Bryant and Priory. Because everyone knows Priory won\'t let sleeping dogs lie. So, be a darlig,and UPDATE. You\'re driving me insane. Truly.