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for Hands, Tongues, and Spankings

by swissmiss

person crazy1
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow 3 words awsome and more please!! btw i think it's original i've never read anything like it, and hopefully you'll write more, i'll reveiw again if you do. bye until next time
person Erotic Lover
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG... that was so~ good.. please continue! ><;; I\'m not one for father/daughter though.. the brother/sister thing was hot, keep on writing!
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You need to write more reallly quick you are very good
person anya
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pleaseplease please DON\'T let the father join them i repet DON\'T i really really love this fic it\'s fanfuckingtastic
there father joining them is just way to predicteble(im just guessing this so if your not then just ignore my review)
update soon

yours truly,anya
person OMG
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God that was just....im just... there are no words to discride your greatness I just chaged my underwear from the last story now i have to changed them...AGAIN this is just great i\'m running out of panties ( i love them great little lacy ones that ya get a great vew of when i bend over) i\'m sure your looking at your computer screen going WHY THE HELL IS SHE TELLING ME THIS well im a horny phyco@_@ that will come and get you if you don\'t update soon

singed tanya
person PhoebeADA
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well I nearly cum reading it. Where is the next part. The girl surely need to be punished by daddy....
And maybe the boys by mum....
person Kimie
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg, i loved that! you must continue this story!
person Bekll
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! And very scary the ending. Lol. Will you write a chapter to follow it?? Please?
person S. Kitty
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANNA HEAR MORE!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person B Oots
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what happens next.