rate_review Reviews

Awesome ^^.

Awesome ^^.

omg! It\'s 3:30 in the morning! thanks for keeping me up with this AMAZING story! I just spent well over 2 hours reading this story and all I have to say it that it\'s the best. You can write a love scenes! wow...I can NOT wait for the rest, excellent writing, excellent plot! I will be impatiently waiting for more, awsome job!

Please update!!!
I think this is a really good story thats got direction. PLEASE CONTINUE.

Finally!!!! I have been waiting for this chapter for such a long time and you did not disappoint! I\'m really proud of you for continuing with this story after such a long hiatus, when most authors on this site would have abandoned it completely. I\'m looking forward to more updates since this still is one of the most intellectual yet stimulating stories out there.

Jusr \"rediscovered\" this story...and was pleased to find three new chapters-that and once again impressed with how much you write each chapter, I read pretty fast so a long chapter is always welcomed, lol. Very interesting, deep, detailed, rich story, intriqued by the characters...wondering avidly if the Landlady is anything \"important\"...hmmmm? Thanx for the worthy read!

She knew she was not supermodel material… Her hair was shoulder length and naturally an ash blond with a bit of an auburn tinge. She was not skinny, but was still slender in the sense that she had curves, a good size bust, thin waist and voluptuous hips…she was not fat, not in the least bit, but she was no stick either… She did pride herself on having a symmetrical face, even though her eyes were really different colors and it gave the illusion that one eye was wider than the other…

yyou\'ve got the gift there\'s no question...iot was almost \"excruciationgly good.\" words cchosen with care...

but i call that above paragraph just to point something out for better or wose...

she defines herself by the things she is NOT -- NOT supermodel materail, not fat, not a stick either....and that...

what is being given away by the characters self description here? the answer is up to you, this is sort of as a writers\' question.

great reading...

i got a sense of far more to come from this.

Wow! an original fic with some plot! Excellent fic.

Thanxs!!! It's always great to get answers!! And I don't think you need to worry about this recent chapter, since all good stories need a build-up of plot! Keep up the good work and good luck in college.

Whoo! I'm back! I do believe I reviewed before...Though I might be mistaken...Read too many dang stories. Heh.
At any rate! You are doing a fantastic job with this story! I simply love it, you've gotten me so interested in it and I can hardly wait for you to update next so I can find out what happens. Spelling and grammar is good, too. ^.- It's great that each chapter you write is about twenty pages, because it means more reading for the reader. Sometimes short chapters can be annoying, ya know? But yea, excellent plot, looking forward to reading more, hurry and update! XD
-Joey-