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for The wedding dinner

by goldenlady

person demondragon6 (not wanting to sign in)
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I hope you continue it so that cousin gets a nice kick in the ass and those two can have "proper" fun...
person Nonny
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly written! Not only is it arousing, but it is romantic, and, best yet- clear! No misspellings or bad grammar or punctuation, wonderful (and correct) usage of the English language to create a story I wish I had more to read. Both plot and sex are stimulating.
Fifteen stars!!! :)
person LadyRain
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit, that was erotic. I really like your stories a lot. Now I"m all tingly inside
person Johannafulls
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lots of it is really well written. Not very realistic, but who needs reality? :)
As someone who has had her share of lesbian sex, it's not exactly what's
gonna go on. But maybe that's just me. Peace, and continue writing.
person Redhead
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
3rd chap cousin runs away with the bride on her weddingnight *wicked grin* DAMN I 'd like to see that I think this will add some spice to the whole fic!

PLZzz continue PLZ...
person Tokimon
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its cute, and now im kinkda horny ....