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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Don\'t give up... just sit down in front of the computer and tell yourself that you\'re not getting up again until you\'ve written a page, or write out other ideas you have planned out and come back to this part. Don\'t give up... it would be a shame if you did. And could you let me know when you update? I\'m notorious for forgetting about stories... yeah. Anyway, thank you... I like this.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cool, man. Its true about the water too, it does look a little blackish in the morning.
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuu have 2 continue!! please!!!!1
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyyyy come on i want more!!!!!!!!!!!1
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
go on....................
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O shit guys sorry about that weird line, what had the phrase \"she reasond\" in the middle of the paragraph it was a typo. hehe well anyway Id like to you know, apoligize that it was soooo short but it is an experement, and I am a first time writer, lemons will be included when I make them fall in love and fuck! (FLF)
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! please hurry as make it steamy!!